Comments : What I've Become

  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Wow...I liked the last paragraph the best !! Since you just aren't writing new poems :) I'm reading all your previous ones...:) They just amaze me one by one :) hehe...But I'll keep waiting for you to write a new one. GOSHH write!! :( Ok...no pressure :) Nice poem. I liked the wording and the last stanza really spoke to me..

    ~Run out of words

  • 16 years ago

    by Run out of words

    Wow...I liked the last paragraph the best !! Since you just aren't writing new poems :) I'm reading all your previous ones...:) They just amaze me one by one :) hehe...But I'll keep waiting for you to write a new one. GOSHH write!! :( Ok...no pressure :) Nice poem. I liked the wording and the last stanza really spoke to me..

    ~Run out of words