Yeah this one is good just dont accually do that again you scared me LOL

Nice poem. The flow seemed a little ify here and there, but over all it was a nice poem. The emotions are strong and heartfelt, good job.

Please r/r/c "the mirror" and two others of your choice.

Very emotive and powerufll... there was a great flow and rhythm to the poem, i loved it... 5/5

Great job. Nice flow and descriptions. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Great job! This poem was really very awesome, the emotions are soooooooooo strong and understandable, I felt it all!

-Ann

Much emotions showed in this short but well written poem that Ive enjoyed reading.

Keep on writing on what you feel and like.