This is a great poem with excellent flow and even more meaning nicely written 5/5 check a few poems of mine out u'll enjoy them especially to cover up the pain thanks and keep up the good work

What the crap ashle, i posted another comment on smeone elses cause i thought they were u!, but anyways, i'm posting this in the school librarey!

Very well written, such emotion, keep up the good work!! 5/5!!
Much Love,
~*Danielle*~