This is such a great poem as you have put such emotion in it, I really like how you have done it.......... so great......
you have gave out a great message, specially i like
Why you laugh the way you do sometimes
Even though the end is insanity

i think this two lines spoke alot.....great word choice.......keep up the great job and a 5/5 from me...

Goran

It's very beautiful. It's got great writing. I liked this line;
While I sit beneath the bulbs of heaven
Good good.

This is a very beautiful poem. I loved the flow of it and the concept. Also the picture that you painted here was that of a fairy tale. the meaning of this poem to me signifies a special night between you and you significant other. And on that night you shut down all your barriors andd just let nature flow. To me, the most important part of a poem is the picture that has been painted. And here my friend you have painted a Picaso. Excellent job! 5/5

Best wishes
Letty

Well, this was quite the uplifting poem I needed this morning. It seemed so, happy-go-lucky. I read this one slowly, and quietly, and it seemed so perfect. Great job!

I loved this, it was so well written.
I enjoyed the imagery, flow and wording very much, and I have nothing bad at all to say about this.
It was excellent.

The picture you painted with this poem was simply beautiful. Your word choice was delightful and the final stanza was so uplifting.
Great job

Hmmm, very different. very different.
this poem seems really mysterious and it makes the reader take a second to think, which is a very rare talent. I thought you started out really strong, and it really made me want to read on and see what happens, but i felt that the vibe of mysterious and curiosity was weakening as the poem went on.
"Tonight the world will drown in silence
As I awake and pass through your back door
Tonight I will weep the same clear tears
And dream the dreams you store"
-those were my favorite lines, and it sounded like you were about to tell a scary story, which instantly caught my attention. it looks to me you've hit a home run, and its a tie, 5:5.

Oh, wow. This was...wow. Lol. I honestly could never write like this. With so much passion and emotion and imagery all mixed into one.

I had no idea what this was about, even though I enjoyed it a lot. =P The flow was great, the imagery was...wow...and the rhymes were excellent. I didn't find anything cliche at all. And I liekd all the emotion and descriptions you put into this. It was well thought out and well written. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Absolutely beautiful..:)