I am still new at this, so any comments could really help. Thanks in advance.

THis poem was very very cute. Great job and pleae keep writing :o)

it was ok maybe it shopuld of been longer but still good

it was alright. but i did enjoy reading it!
keep writing those poems you write so well! Thanx.

i wish i could find my true love xxxxgd poem

Hi! You wrote a very beautiful poem. Viviana is a lucky girl to have you. Don't ever be afraid to show or express the greatness of your love. Keep up the great work!!!

Its a little short......i dunno, not my kinda poem.....but great rhymning....i love the first stanza!!

hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it

hey am here in class with two of my friends n we think you're poem is the most preciouse thing ever keep writing we love it

I love your poem. I feel the exact same way about my boyfriend....i almost started crying when i was reading it you got a great talent keep it up...Kristina

hey great poem, i really liked it,
jemma xxx

Awww!! I love this poem too!! This is so terrific and sweet!!! Great job on it!!

Amy

i liek this poem sooooooo much it is AWSOME

Short and sweet

It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon

It really good i like it and i hope u keep going with this and with the situation coz it is pretty cool zeinab the shymoon