by AnnMarie
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It is a nice riddle but a bit confusing. In the begining you say "no wind blows" and then later on you say breezes blow" Then again you say "making no noise" then you go on to say'leaves crumple" "a twig snaps". So as I said a bit confusing, but all in all a nice write. |
by Brittany C
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Very good poem. From what I understand in this poem someone is stocking a person or animal in the woods and kills it. It is a great poem. Another 5/5 |
by Dacey Flame
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Nice riddle. It was a bit contradictury, but I understood it just fine! I think its about hunting something or someone in the woods at night, and then killing them. |
by Darien
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Hunting? I noticed I commented on the previous poem, and I'm glad you editted it. It definitely read better the second time. |