Comments : A Quick Fix {{senryus}}

  • 13 years ago

    by Courtney

    Again, beautifullll!! I like how your title's part of the last line. Very nicee. 0.~

    **Lor

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I thought this was sad but sweet.
    Beautifully written.

  • 13 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    LOVELOVELOVE.. LOVE.. just kidding so this is my new favorite poem.. its soo sad but soo great.. the flow is flawless and the word choice is perfect.. but i think where you wrote

    "She lose all she knew,
    When he walked away from her,
    Leaving her distressed."

    i think you may have meant

    "she `lost` all she knew"

  • 13 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I can also relate to this poem, i can feel the emotions coming back to me as i read. fantastic hun!!
    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 12 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Really sad and sweet poem..i thought it was good...great job!

    ~michelle~