Uggh, That's so gross. 5/5
Hahaha... But nice flow- It rocks so bad. ^_^

I love it,i agree with the other person your flow is awsome
auna

Wow that was amazinly gross!
It was wicked tho lol!
Great work!
A definite 5/5!
=-)

Gross indeed.

Spooky... I liked the descriptions - made me feel like I was taking part at what you describe in this lovely poem =)
5/5