Mmkay. this was very good and the plot was more than just hearbroekn it was "he likes her and THATS why im heartbroken." but in this stanza i think that " know you won't like me," doesnt do the poem justice.

maybe something like...

"I know you can't love me"

if LOVE is too strong a word, use "feel this way," or something to that affect.

other than that, i like it.

thx for ur comment,
~Sore