That's like the BEST poem i have ever read no exzgeration or however you spell it it's so awsome i LUV IT! espeacialy the end so dramatic!

That was awesome...i loved the emotion and power behind ur words...thx 4 a truely wonderful poem

I like this poem, a lot. I like how you used "puppet strings" it was pretty creative. Good job writing it.

x.xBrokenx.x

WOW!...that was amazing!...you have such amazing talent that many people, including me, wish that they had more of...btw thanks for the comment!...comment back?! haha

Beautiful poem my darling...