Wow, another great poem, but very sad....... but you have created a picture of a strong personality within the poem, which is great........
your poems are great and you are a grea writer.......
keep it up

Another very strong poem.

Just one thing:

"So today I say goodbye to you
Leaving you rot in this place"

^ Here, in the last stanza, the last line would read better if it was, "Leaving you TO rot in this place."

Anyhow, very good poem. :)

Wow, very emotional peice you have written there. I loved it. However this line, "'Cause it is not longer my burden" I believe should be changed to, "'Cause it is no longer my burden" Other than that wonderful write.

Peace, Joe