Great poem! Love the wording. You are every talented poet keep it up!

This really represents friendship and God and whatnot.

I really liked this! there was one thing though....if you are going to use rhyming, make sure that all the stanzas follow the same pattern...like in the last one, the rhyming lines were 1st and 4th instead of 2nd and 4th, like the rest of the lines. but otherwise it was great! 5/5

Good poem! There were quite a few lines where the flow was very forced. One line would be a four word line and the next would ten words...........it makes it less pleasant for the reader to read!

Good write though,
-AnnMarie