I liked thsi poem. It was sad and disturbing, made me wake up, you know. It was really well written.
Its a good quote, pretty deep, and the poem really made this quote mean something.
keep writing

Wow! amazing work!
Wow!!!! i honestly dont know what to say! brilliant poem!
i like the last stanza, well done!
Your rhyming was great and the flow was perfect, i honestly wish i could give you more than 5 for this one.
10/5

`Murder.

Wow. The last stanza was amazing, I loved the metaphor there.. Tell your friend that that is a great quote. You really did well on this poem, the flow was pretty good, the descriptions and rymes worked well and the emoiton was strong.. Nicely done sweetie 5/5

Wow... amazing poem!!!
the flow was amazing... umm... i dont really know what to say!!!! they way you wrote it,,, i mean WOW!!! 5/5 and not lower than that at all... i really dont know what to say!!! i am speachless... really!!!

Awesome poem. Loved the wording

That was a very good poem even though it was about death i absolutly loved it! It was also sad but very good i love ur "quote" 2!

Not too bad... I'll be honest, it is very cliche and the flow was off. Those are probably why it got downvoted... But, I'll give it a five since you helped me. To improve: Don't go for cliche rhymes, and read it to yourself outloud; make sure it doesn't seem broken. Good luck.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

This is a great poem i loved it.

I really like it

I liked it it wuz hot

Like it? I dont like it, I LOVE it!
Its... I cannot even explain.
Its wonderful.

I loved this poem. It was so differant, real and i really like it! Have Fun!

lol♥ xxx

Very very powerful.
It was unique in certain ways and you put in that quote perfectly.
5/5
*Gem*

I really like that you portrayed your emotions very well!

Loved the poem very good 5/5 there is a lot of emotion iget form the poem witch makes the writing better

Really good have a look at mine see wa u think

This is such a heart touching poem..i think that its great 2 read when ..well anytime!

Love it please read my poem My Heart it would mean a lot to me I give this poem a 5/5

Good poem, i really liked how well it flowed

O MY GOD, THAT WAS SOOO GOOD