Comments : How We Surive

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Nicely done =]

    Miss you xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    This is a really great poem cody keep up the good work
    robyn xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    GREAT!! 5/5... This is REALLY good! I LOVE the idea and how you took it and ran with it! You're really talented, and I appreciate having access to your favorite works 24/7. I'm glad I found this site almost a year ago!! :):)
    PV

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    It's a bright part in your heart
    that stops you from falling apart
    the part of you that wants to be free
    the part of you no one else can see
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    Hey cody hun!! I miss you so much!!
    This is a great poem...(Not sure you remember me but yeah we used to call each other brother and sister) The stanza that is show above was what I though the best stanza in the whole poem!! The poem is great and I hope for you too write more some day eh!!
    xx Roxy Love you!

  • 15 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That poem is really good

  • 15 years ago

    by Roxy

    =D Amazing poem once again big bro :)
    My favorite stanza of the poem I would have to say issss:-

    It's a bright part in your heart
    that stops you from falling apart
    the part of you that wants to be free
    the part of you no one else can see

    Mainly because of the words you had used and the rhyming scheme was perfect and also there holds a lot of meaning in those four lines :) And I absolutely love the poem It's amazing :) I wish you would post more poems up big bro :)))))))))) xxx At he moment I kinda have writters lock..lol...not fun xxxxx