My littl ebaby all grown up! lol its really good except "secretes" is spelled "secrets".

Also in the second line you should have a semi-colon (;) after back. "even after" doesnt flow right, i would change it to "when", but its your decsion.

Third stanza, after "caused" it should be a semi-colon. and a comma after myself.

Last stanza is great except "feel bad" seems really "sub-quality", id look for a good synonym to help the flow

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