Very well written, and very heartfelt. 5/5

*just to help you out though..
I look at the floor
All I see is a shiny liquid
The FLOOD is stained red like my hands
I take a better look at the floor

*im pretty sure you meant FLOOR instead of FLOOD :-D

A few mistakes Deej. But a good poem. a lil repetitive but u got talent. =]

x♥x:Lauren