I love this poem.
I especially like the part where you say tears is just a must, as unless you've lost someone people don't think you should continue to cry for them, but glad someone understands that you will forever shed a tear.
Keep it up
Jadwe

Aww. This poem is sad. I sometimes wish I can bring back people so we can talk, too. It hurts to know you can't. Good job on this piece. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Wow...I loved this, particuarly the last line.
I thought the flow was well and I enjoyed the wording a lot.

Aww.. this is such a sad poem. But you did an amazing job at describing everything. The last stanza was absolutely beautiful and was definitely a great way to end this poem! I loved this!

Great job your gettin really good or i should say your improving you have always been good. love the poem

I promise you she hears it. . .did your grandma teach you to write??? if so she musta been pretty good, 5/5

Awww! Such a sad poem. Very deep and meaningful. So much emotian throughout it. The imagery was really cool. Had a great flow! A very beautiful poem. Keep it up!!

Okay, it's official - I LOVE your poetry. This was beautiful. I know what it feels like to want to bring a person back, so I can definitely relate.

"Grief it blankets us" -- this line, I loved. I'm not all too sure why, haha. I just love the image which came from the word "blankets". It fitted perfectly.

Excellent job.

I like how everything just goes together nice job 5/5

Oh god,
this one was amazing as well,
you are a great writer dear. keep up the great job as always,