WOW!!! Such a strong and powerful poem. It touched me alot and made me feel as though I was there and knew the person. Keep up the great work!

Yes, I agree w/ all of them it was like I was there and you r an awsome poet!!
ALWAys,
NiKkI

such an excellent poem, you are so talented.

Thanks for the comments guys, they really mean a lot to me!

hey that was a amazing poem,very touching. btw thanks 4 comenting on sum of my poems

:-( sad poem... sounds like a sad period in your life.

Very sad. I can relate...as most others can. I hope you're over that stage now. Great job, really...I loved it.