A good poem, heartfelt, sad, and even a slightly angry overtone. Good job!
Charisma*

Wow!!!! thats good

''I take back all the things I've done
and the sweet things that I said
because you no longer care for me
I might as well be dead''

I Love that stanza, it's my favourite part.

I thought it was really sweet the way you ended it.

Very sad and sweet at the same time. I really enjoyed reading this poem. I gave it a 5/5. It was great.

What I don't take back is the love I've given
I meant every single bit
I was willing to work things out
When all you could do was quit

thats my favorite part i truely love this poem great work!!!

I like this. its awesome
Great job! =]