Lmfao thats well random haha!
but still well written, what on earth possesed ya to do that? lol tis well good tho =]=]=]=]

~*~Jen~*~

LOL very funny! very unique! loved it!
Charisma*

That was awesome, you must be very creative to come up with a poem from the point of view of a shooting star. Great job.

Lol, that was amazing :) always a great write Gem, loved it 5/5

~[AnotherDream]~

I like your poems. they are fun and easy to read.

To be honest, i have NO idea where i got this idea from, i was just sat staring into space and doodling and this poem took shape, lol.
I'm not gonna question it ;)
Thankyou everyone. x

Hehe, very funny. Original and funnn :),.Great Job :)

I really like this. It reminds me of something I would write, and is sort of adorable.

Good Job.

Lmao nice poem, 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

Ha. Good one. You must get realy bored but bored does you good because you got all 3 of your poems on the top rated. Lol. Later Hun.

~*Tay*~

Very good poem keep them coming

That was just awsome. Poor poor star :) very nice poem!

Very good :)

Ha ha ha that was funny i liked it lol

How very creative Gemma !

The lines just seemed to fall magically in place. And the ending stanza was so cute. Sure did put a smile on my face.
Wonderful read Gemma, very much enjoyed.

I was I was more mild"
^^^^
Second last stanza, last line. I think you may have meant 'wish' instead of 'was'.....so sorry if I am wrong.

Take care and keep writing. I am very much enjoying your funny poems and look forward to reading more of your poetry soon.

Awesome..different, unique..hmm great job