I look up to you i really do your an amazing poet and you realy helped me thank you your admirer
james

Omg.. o.O deze is gOed.. hij zorgt helemaal voor koude rillingen bij mij.. o.O wow! khoop alleen niet dat je het echt meent.. ;) xXx

Well, its definitely dark, and most certainly disturbing if that was what you were going for. But at the same time, also deeply sad... life only takes you prisoner if you allow it to, you dont like the way life is... then change it. You alone have the power to change your own world.

Sammib

Well, I'll leave a comment after reading that. I'd have to go with medicore on that poem. Ranting poetry has to be kind of short in my view most of my ranting poetry is quick and non-painful.
So, I give this a three for sounding like my mom being drunk.

Magnifcently written well worded poem, the flow was smooth, stayed on track, all in all i thought it was a great read, keep up the good work.