I love it:) only ''Would you shoot me with that gun?'' that part I don't understand.

the end :
This is my apology;
I hope you take it to heart.
I never want to leave you;
I could not live if we were apart.

I really love that^_^ great work!

It's not that I don't like that part, but I find it strange it doesn't really fit in with the rest of the poem.

you could use the word begun.
like : You say you love me more than anything;
while it only just begun...or something like that.

but anyway I would like to say again I really like this poem;) it's one of my favorites.
oh and thanks for the comment!

Yeej I love it :)

Another great poem by you...5/5