Comments : Dying Souls Of the WORld

  • 17 years ago

    by Purple

    Ya know, you can take this poem and say the exact opposite is happening. Whilst you or me are crying our eyes out over the latest unhappy thing, some one is having the best day of their life some where...

    Great poem, gets one thinking. Flow's great, rhyming is spot on, message is cleanly written... Masic sense both as words and as sound.

    Good job. :D 5/5, and I don't give everyone that.