So this is is wear the starving children came from. it's really good. i love it. you're a great writter.

I liked this.
It is very thought provoking.
I thought at times the flow was a little shaky but apart from that, you did a wonderful job.

The fourth staza last line there should be their. Other than that there are no problems with this, As a matter of fact it is absoultly brillant.
the message was strong and clear, and the imagery was vivid, the emtion was powerful, really really good. I am adding this to my favorites. Keep up the exceptional work.

It's only a dollar a day
To change this child's life
But still we say no way
It's not our problem right?

I guess it really shouldn't
Be left up to me and you
Someone else can pay the dollar
And help them make it through

I love this stanza because so many people see things like this and think they shouldnt have to do antyhing about it because its not their problem.. somone else can help them out... i love the way you wrote those 2 stanzas..

But I ask you why?
Can't we lend a helping hand
Just a chance at life
Is all this child demands

A chance to go to school
And get there education
For only 99 cent's
What's the complication?

i love these 2 stanzas too because they are just sooo true.. you just wrote the entire poem so perfectly and I couldn't have said it in a better way.. you really got the message across and put it out there.. excellent job.. 5/5 for sure.

Good poem