Comments : Missing You.

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+ I see you've had 12 visits and no-1 has voted and/or commented!! How could they do that?? This is such a awesome poem!! Seriously, I don't usually rave about poems unless there really good. And girl, this is GOOD!! Love ya work +.+

  • 17 years ago

    by ToxicSpookyAngel

    This is great......i just can't figure out the hidden meaning....sorry i'm slow haha

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! what a Poem!! damn... that was FANTASTIC!!! speechless... I've never read something like that... a most pleasant read, Jenna!!

    Ciao xx *easily 5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Hey! This is an awesome poem! Im left speechless! This is just great! and sorry i couldnt figure out the hidden meaning either! But the poem is jsut sooo good!

    Keep SMiling
    Love Sucks

  • 17 years ago

    by Cara

    Wow that poem was soo amazing!

  • Wow both beautiful and long, I could never write like this and I hope you continue to because I'm adding you to fav.s Your poems are wicked awesome and I love them all! Great Job 5/5

    -Mia

  • I really do love this poem...the tragedy is beautiful..so yea if u told me the hidden mANINGS THAT WOULD help me understand it better

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Something about this poem just worked really well... if it had just been the first stanza, you might have risked having just another suicide poem, but the fact that you showed the situation from the side of the girl as well, when she didn't know.... that was really cool. good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Sweety. i love you. and i think i can peice together some of the hidden meanings. i love you dear. i really do.

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was ... INCREDIBLE! I mean, just breathtaking! I am so glad I read it and it kept me intrigued the whole way through. Oh! And I wanted to thank you so much for your poem in my contest. It was my first and I was afraid of how it would turn out, but I was really pleased. So thank you so much for that. Keep up the excellent work! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    This is so sad. Really didnt get the meaning though but you took the time to write this so now I know why its special to you! I'm sorry about your dad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    At first i though i was reading a story, but now i still astauned by the end of the play, it just hurts to know that these two souls have never met...well there is always after life, awesome work...its a good read...

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Awesome poem. I love this.

  • 14 years ago

    by A F

    I looooooove this so much. I love you as an author! I don't get the hidden message though.