I like this poem of yours, it is worded good and I like how you structured it and all, it is very good. One thing though, at the beginning you were saying the dark wont stay long
"Or is this just my foolish hope" then at the end ur like,
"In the dark, at peace at last."
peace at last??? but you wanted it to go away.....so yeah, just a little confusingly written cause u changed ur mind...
Nice work
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