I loved this!
It was orginal in concept, and I loved the imagery and wording.

I loved the style of this poem, and the meaning behind it was fantastic, you gave discription so well, this is my favourite of yours that i've read up to now.

5/5

Oh wow nice rhyming and words were great keep it up
it was a sad poem too it made it flow nicely

You have done an excellent job with this. Although short, it gets the point actoss in such a unique fashion. Definetly a 5/5!

Excellent poem short and to thepoint