Wow, that's really good; 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

Lovely poem.
Could do with a bit of tuning.
But it's nice. :]

Take Care,
N-G-C-S.

The flow was great! It was a very pleasant poem, a lot of emotion in it!
-AnnMarie

I liked it idk wat to say besides that

Hey... good poem

Good one i agree

Lmao. I like the part with the Stupid cow. Just cause you managed to use Stupid cow lmao. Awesome.

Nice Poem Dude!

Very confusing

Wow, nice one i especially like "Time in the only thing a human cannot hack"
so so true!
thats awesome

Very well written! I like the subject chosen! Keep up the good work. :D

~~Teres (Spanish367)

I like this poem alot. I understand all of it. It's almost as you took the words out of my mind. I love it. =)

Geez hun you are a great writer i love this one! Your work is wonerful

Nice poem i love it *5/5*!!!

Good work nice poem

Great poem again. Lol. Your work is really great! Again thought i think you could improve by putting punctuation in. Still it was really an injoyable read! Keep them coming! xx