Wonderful poem, 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

Very strange, but good poem It is really differnt then the regualr material you read today......great write!
-AnnMarie

THIS IS THE FIRST POEM I EVER WROTE.. :)

Its great! brilliantly written, 5/5 definately

This is a great poem, different but in as good way!
I loved it!
much luv misty

Excellent poem 5/5 its an intriging love poem. keep wriitng

Wow . . . i loved it . . . it;s different but wonderfully writen
OXo Laura Marie

This is good i really like it i think u did a very good job and put lots of expression in it good job

keenan

Wow...yur first poem:|..
this is amazing
5/5
great job!

Beautifully written... keep writing..

That was a really good poem!!!!!

kelsey!

That is beautiful i love it so much keep writeing

THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ! Seriously man. WOW! Like Holy CRAP! Its Amazing. Just WOW! I loved it. Seriously. AMAZING!

Thats beautiful

Eccentric, but beautifully worded!!
rad :D

I loved it! It was like a song to me. :D Very good work. Keep writing! :)

~~Teres (Spanish367)

Beautiful beautiful poem keep up the good work

This was awesome the title rocks too its a real eye catcher

Kind of a poem like no other lol but in a good way 5/5

I really like this one alot its great!5/5