WOW! That was incredible! There was so much emotion in every word that it shocked me and made me what to keep reading. I REALLy love this one, and I'm going to add it to my favorites :D
The stanzas worked really well also, so keep it up, and if it was possble, 6/5

Hatori

P.S. Thanks for the RRC :D

I love your poems

Wow... speechless is the right word.
thank you for sharing