Mostly, I loved how you repeated the first two lines again at the end. It made this already lovely poem so much stronger, so much more effective than it already was. One small criticism to make, I don't know if you've noticed, but you seem to have mis-spelt cherish. Other than that, it's a beautiful poem, and I'm glad I saw your discussion post and read it.

Aww it's sad, but cute. I know that must be hard to understand, but that was how I saw it.

The flow was good, the rhymes were original for the most part, and the imagery was great. I thought this was depressing but still cute at the same time, 'cause you said that you loved someone still to give up your heart, but he had hurt you in some way. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha