Yet another favourite.
I loved this, the rhyme scheme and wording, flow, imagery, it was all amazing.

F'ing awesome. reads very well. excellent representation. made me think way back to school bathrooms. the cold granite. that industrial cleaner smell. the echo of your voice. this poem was very stimulating for me. so tragic and sad. fantastic. -beav

The boy just takes his beating
As other kids watch eagerly
The boy picks up his glasses
Puts them back on so he can see

The Bully smacks them off again
And crushes them with his shoe
And tells the boy "you don't want to see
What I'm about to do to you

really really powerful, it screamed at me, maybe because I wear glasses. lol That was well written , and powerfully put, the last two stazas were also perfect, and so strong. It ended well, and it is sad but true. The emtion was really really amazing, and the word choice blew me away. I would have to say that this is my favorite poem by you. 5/5 although if I could I would give you more.

Good poem

Awww that poor kid ;_; made me cry thanks -.- Reallly powerful and sad nice

I LOVE THIS

Amazing :]]