This so lovely thanks

Aww.. that is so sweet. You have such beautiful imagery and perfect flow. I like the story behind this. Wonderful write. =] 5/5

Tammie

Very good i like it alot i wish i could cnnect sometimes as wel as u

OK i like that. . . It flowed nicely and the decription was brilliant and imaginative. . .
Like scribble it takes a alternate turn to a subject
good job
Laura
XxX

That was awesome. So beautiful an image that I could see the vase. Everything about it was perfection.

I liked this very much.

I enjoyed the rhyme scheme and the imagery very much, although in a couple of places the flow did seem to be off a little.

Apart from that, I have nothing bad to say about this work!

Wow, that poem was so refreshing, adavanced vocab, i felt like i was cleansing my body while i was reading it. alot of imagery, rhyming was not forced, "In a lover's intimate glee" that was my favorite line, it just made me smile for some odd reason. anyway, as flavor flav would say "this girl deserves some mad props yo, you know what i'm sayin g!?" aka, 5;5

As love arise

^^ Shouldn't it be "arises"?

Wow, this was beautiful. The flow was good, the descriptions were very detailedd, and the emotion was very clear and strong. I liked this one, the imagery was stunning. 5/5

Such a sweet read! It was really beautiful, and had excellent imagery! An excllnt use of vocab throughout the poem. Great discription. Keep it up! xx

This is the first poem of yours I read, and you're already on my favourites. As a friend of mine loves to say; I'm floored, man!

Mm I saw one grammar mistake .
But besides that, it was beautifully written .
Another poem with great description .
And it flowed nicely .
Yur a fantastic writer .
Definitely going on my faves .

--I`ll do Migration after I finish my hw .
..ღ__MiNDYY

This is a touching Peace of work....
its soo good...
dont really know what to say

5/5 keep it up!

This is a pretty poem ,I love the imagry of those beautiful peacocks.
Keep up the good work.

Awwwww..* I really like this. I really like the last couple lines. The whole poem flows together very well. Keep it up.

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