Great message behind it, 5/5

I support the principle of being an individual...not to be corrupted by the evil within society. That's.. REAL!

Wow such a true poem. the first stanza brought tears to me eyes! excellent job writing this! 5/5

~Kristina

I agree!!!! i like how it began with a story and slowly formed into a... message. grrrreat job!!

Emily

Interesting poem here. I loved it, especially the message put behind it. Yeah and I too really liked how you managed to start it off. 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

Great poem! Really different(which is good) very strong feeling, flow was ify, but overall a great write!
-AnnMarie