"Her feet swirl in the watery blood.
That had spilled out from her slit wrist.
But low and behold she's never felt more alive.
My heaven's angel will be missed..."

The ending was so bittersweet and so beautiful.
Your wording was great, they seemed to pain a picture of what was happening.
You have a gift =)
5/5
*Gem*

This poem was amazing, and the ending was trully magnificent, it was perfect. So sad and deep, yet still these very thoughts creep into many people's minds. Wonderful poem. Beautiful.

Beautifully written..
and no I am not claiming it as my own..since there are quotation marks before and after the quote..
=)
anyways..5/5
great work..
and keep writing=)
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Nice job. The descriptions were excellent. There was beauty within the lines. It held a sad undertone cut through with a sense of...I don't know...peace if that's the word. Cool write.
~Faith-less