Comments : Illusion

  • 17 years ago

    by NonsensicallyNeurotic

    I had originally written this for an English assignment, but I brushed it up a little and now I love it. -Fionn

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Ooh, this is a really good piece. Heartfelt, and emotion filled. Very nice. I particularly liked this stanza

    My lullaby is tears
    My routine is regret
    But at least he kept our friendship
    That no one could forget.

    That worked really well, and I can relate. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by XSugarSexSuicideX

    NICE! i love it! great job jussie! btw, Athame is Ciaran

  • 17 years ago

    by NonsensicallyNeurotic

    Yep, I know. About Athame Being Ciaran. +waves overenthusiastically+ HI CIARAN!

    Thanks for the comments.

    I hate writer's block.