Comments : One wish

  • 17 years ago

    by Skater

    I know Id make alot of wishes and I think that you have a gift and it touches my heart when somebody just reaches out and says what you were meaning to say keep it up!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow hun, that is a great poem. I can relate to this 100%. Another excellent poem from you, straight from the heart. =] Keep it up.

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    "I'd create a world for me and you where all others would be banished" This is very good i enjoyed this line the most out of the whole poem, ut shows you would do anthing for this person and you really love this person, its a amazing poem.!!! i really liked it!