This is an excellent poem. 5/5. so unique. keep writing

Wow, this is so emotional, it really catches the reader and keeps them until the end. The rhyms were awesome, the flowing was perfect, can't say much more but I loved it!!

Keep it up,
your friend:)
alissa

Thats very well written keep it up.. 5/5 good job

Wow!!!! fantastic poem!!! really loved it!

Its really good. i usually hate wen ppl compare tears to lakes, oceans, rivers. but this was really good. 5/5

Its really good. i usually hate wen ppl compare tears to lakes, oceans, rivers. but this was really good. 5/5

I wonder who's thE gUrL.,.,
i feLt LoneLy for her.,.,
nice.,.,
keEp up thE LovELy w0rk!!

This is really really good!
5/5 no question!
you described the instance that everyone goes through when their heart is broken... and in only a way that someone whos been there could!
great job.... sad... but great
<3
XxAshleyxX