I can relate.
it an excellent poem.

Wow. Another great poem.

Well, not great, but almost perfect. :]
The rhyming didn't seem forced.
The flow was great. :]]
And the emotion was amazing.

Hun, if the next two poems are as good as the two I've read, I will add you to my favorites.
I love your poetry so far, and I hope to see more of it. :]

5/5. Fo Sho.

This was so pretty! The rhymes weren't a bit forced, your choice of words was excellent, and you really know how to convey emotion well. Fantastic job! 5/5 once more, you totally deserve it!

Oh, just give it time!
I really got the sence of emotion out of this. Its wuite lovely, and I can relate to it. Its ALLWAYS good to write poetry that people can relate to.

Really good poem here.

As a reader, I can tell that this poem was a poem that you put a lot of thought and emotion in it. You had a great flow and your choice of words were very good. 5/5 Keep it up!

Stephanie

You did a really good job on this. I just thought this stanza was a little shaky:

I won't fall for those words again,
You came a little too late.
Blame your older brother,
He changed our fate.

The last line; I think it should be a couple words longer. That's just me though. You still did a good job. 5/5

>black&&blue

Awwww its long but you know it is good

Haha, i know this feeling... except i am still in love with the guy but i HATE his brother 5/5

Again, rythym is nice and the rhyming is original, I really enjoyed it.

I realy loved this poem. Please never change it. It has great flow and structure. 5/5

Wow.
Strange, how I can relate to you in some ways.
I'm scared of letting people in my heart because it's already been broken too much.
Wonderful flow and great vocabulary! Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie