Ooh, I can really imagine the picture you created. Great job

This piece was very nicely done. The form seems really interesting and fun. =P ..In my opinion, I thought you did a fantastic job at it, you created great imagery in such few words! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

This poem didn't do much for me. it wasn't very -not to be mean- poetic, and didn't display much emotion. i don't know. i just think it could have been done better. x3Lauren