I really liked the imagery, although some of it seemed very bizzare, it really made me think. The similies and metaphors were great! Nature poems are always full of those, and they create beautiful and peaceful settings. Nicely done.

My bones, like the frozen spheres
of winter. Chatter against the empty
hollowness of the bleak color white.
Though some may find love within
the barren trees and dangling ice,
I find nothing but sorrow--

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Amazing lines !

You captured my attention with the first line and simply took my breath away through-out the entire piece.

Wonderfully penned DarkPrincess !
Thank-you for sharing your words.

This is an excellent poem, it flowed very well and from beginning to end it kept me interested to what was being said and i really felt the emotion from this poem.

5/5

Very good imagery.

Thumbs up!

Though some may find love within
the barren trees and dangling ice,
I find nothing but sorrow--
^^ I loved those lines! You described everything very well in this. You twisted winter around and made it into this very sad time.. I absolutely loved that. I could definitely relate to this poem alot. And I think that you did an amazing job in writing this poem. Great job on this! 5/5

Another great poem!
like the form of it and all...
the flow was okay...
and like the words you used!!!
it was different than the others...
keep it up!!!
5/5

This poem gave me chills of winters cold and an isolated feeling of loneliness. very vivid. good one!

5/5--!
I love the imagery in this poem. Nice choice of words. You did a really good job. Keep it up!!

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This poem is different. I love it.5/5 keep up the good work.

Excellent job, really made me feel it. tiny flow problem but great 4/5