Comments : Wax Butterflies

  • 17 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Not as good as your other ones, but still it's a good write. You're in the mood of nature aren't you? lol

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Very short, simple. I love it though! I do like your dark poetry better, but this is still a great poem. I enjoyed the read =D 5/5, as always---

  • 17 years ago

    by Lily

    My butterfly used to shine, I like it
    = D
    teak xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    :) heehee that was good. nothing much to say, but that was great for such a short thing! 5/5
    Emmmm**

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this.
    I don't think it was one of your best, but it was still an enjoyable read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren Waszkiewicz

    Very short and sweet. my only problem is Are, & our coming right after eachother. it hurt my mouth trying to pronounce them . lol. i would try to switch the wording a little there. but it was a cute short poem. good job. =]