You commented on me so i will yours too that poem is very good you made me cringe from the description...not in a bad way....

Great poem :)keep it up

Thats well good but sad aww xx

Jesse i love it, well done, hold on to the good things

... wow this one also has a lot of power in every word ....

This poem is really sad but i really like it great job 5/5.
(((Kelsey)))

Oh wow, that was a deep poem. I could feel the emotion and the heart you put into this one. The flow was very well written. Good work Jess :]