Awww that was adorable!..i absolutely loved it!...so cute...5/5...comment back pleasee!!

Nice poem.. great words with good meening.. continue the good work, your doing great.. XoX

Hiya,
I love youe poem, it flows pretty well. If you would like a couple of suggestions let me know

Aww****how sweet. reminds me of me and my boyfriend. good job.