Omg that is really bad but i no how u feel dads can be so misunderstanding

Ok, there was frequently some grammer and all that mistakes. The line: and you killed me real good
Instead of real good, it sounds better if you use really well. And also capitolize your I's and first words of a sentence, question, statement ect..It just puts your poem together and makes it more sophisticated. And also use some punctuation too. Overall it was a very good poem. And I realy liked it! Still a 5/5. God Bless Hun.
No critisism, just helpful hints.
Hopfully you'll take those and I hope to read more of your future poems.

~*Tay*~