"Tears escaping from out eyes
Clinging to out pillows tight"

[I'm sorry, those lines didn't make sense. "out" should be "our" for the two lines]

Short poem, well thought out. Needs to be editted though.

I liked this, it was short and straight to the point, but I did think it could have more emotion and imagery in it.

I liked the rhyme scheme and flow.

Very good poem. I really don't know what else to say. Just that I wish that this poem was longer. Another 5/5

Short and simple, easy to read, good flow and nice rhymes. Keep writing.

It is truly a great poem with great vocab choices, you have a wonderful style. 5/5 from me.

Wooow. That's amazing. very short, yet... VERY GOOD!! 5/5 keep it up.

thanks for the comment