I loved this one too, you should so just keep writing and writing cos everything you start writing turns to gold honey x x x

This one is cool, very unique indeed....great write

all the best and take care

Well it may have been flippin hard but you did it. And you did it well also. its a great dark poem. I really loved. You shoud give yourself a little pat on the back lol!
5/5

Kelly
xx

Nice poetic meter here and its very strong keep it up huunn.

Lovely! Lovely imagery! I could see a wolf leaping and bounding! I loved it!
xoxo