Sweet, and beautiful. I love your use of imagery and choice of words! ^^ Just one small criticism: you seem to have spelt the word 'should' wrong. Not that it made the poem any less effective, it was still a lovely read.

Wow, that was powerful, well written and well thought-out. Good job 5/5

So sweet i like it,you got great talent and alot of love feeling inside i hope to see it in more of your write,5/5