Bill,
It infuriates me when I see this piece downvoted. I know votes mean nothing it is the comments that count but gosh darn, it just makes me so ticked off that some don't take the time to read into the depth of this piece.
I guess it is like those multiple choice tests we did in our younger years in school, if we couldn't understand the depth of the question, you just ticked off a random 1,2,3,4 or 5......

But a look at the title reveals so much about this poem !

Good Luck with your new house dear friend, I look forward to reading many more of your poetic masterpieces when you are all settled in.
Have a great weekend deary !
Many ((hugs))

Great poem.....no amazing poem this poem reminded me of the first guy i ever loved but couldn't have him i was forever cheering him up and stopping him from doing certain things...... = P
amazing poem once again 10/10

crystal

Our twin souls created in heaven above
Wrapped together in our passionate love
I loved it, these lines in particular. Its a nice thought to know your love was heaven sent.. Loreta

Wow thats all I could say wow that was great its amazing you are really good with words

This is a top poem

What a wonderful poem. The word choices were amazing. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Excellent job!

Very nice and beautiful