REALLY great!!! I would just quote my favorite part but then you'd end up reading the whole poem again, lol, seriously! I mean this was incredibly emotional and just very romantic. and while you've never written a poem that doesn't rhyme you pulled this off beautifully. I guess that's what falling in love with someone does for yah! ; )
Again, great job, Charisma!!!!!! 7/5! lol
~Midnight Sun

"We're kind of like a maze,
And I don't want to find my way out.
I'd rather stay lost with you"

That was beautiful! Totally gorgeous! This is so one of my fave poems by you!
The whole thing was just amazing! I have to make sure Marcus see's and comments this cos it's just fab!
5/5 (i'd vote higher if i could!)
*Gem*

Hey thanx for commenting my poem by the way, i really like this one, your a good writer I've read some of your others too and there good. if you get time can you please check out my poem called "the hurt i once felt" n "emotions".. i think there my best ones and it would mean alot to get your thought as your a really good write
again i really like your work

Awe. thats cute. pulled it together well...

ps- my poem -lies and deciet- i did mean to spell WISH IT TO BE OVER down the side. lol

-Terra

I loved the "Cause it's better to be lost in love verse:
Then to find my way out of it
And never see you again"
But the whole poem was great

5/5. All I can say to describe this poem is...wow. lol. I hope you don't mind me adding you as one of my favorites.

Thanks for the comment on my poem. I had a little trouble with the first stanza. I was just checking out some of your work. You're a very good writer and I can relate to your feelings.

I really liked this poem! That is a nice place to be. Lost With You. Beautiful writing!

I liked it. Awsomely (sorry if thats not a word) written A well deserved 5/5

Aww. 5/5. Somtimes I have the same feelings about a guy like this. So yeah. lol. Keep writing. This is one of your better poems.